But Enough About Me.

Summary

This short essay is about a man named Brian Williams who is an tv news anchor. He is very concerned with the issue in this day in age, of how so many people out in the world are putting alot of their personal information about themselves out on the internet. He is saying that anybody is trusting the world wide web, and no one is taking a second thought of all that could go wrong by doing this. But Williams said that people should not put so much trust into the internet, because it can lead to serious consequences. Also he feels that only certain information should be on the internet about a person, and not their whole life story and very personal contact information. He also talks about how day by day, tv is constantly losing viewers, because of the internet and new electronics are taking over and replacing things that were already here. He feels that what is going on now should all stop.

Response

I would say I agree very much of what the author is trying to say. I feel the same that many people do share way to much information about themselves on the web. Like for instance many people put where their life story, sometimes not just the state or town they live in, but their street name and number. Many others put their real phone numbers, many claim that it is for their friends so that they can keep in contact with them. But sometimes it is not their close friends who see and take down their info,but half of the time it is a bunch of people or a person they don't know, and that one person can use all the information they have gathered to go after or to harrass that certain person. Sharing your personal information on on the internet is very risky business, once it's on the web its hard to get off. Williams is only trying to make a point that people should stop putting all of their trust in the internet and that a person's personal information does not belong on the internet, and that people should only have information that they know are suitable for others to know. But on the second hand I disagree with the second arguement that Williams is trying to make, I feel that new electronic devices and the internet are not responsible for lost tv viewings, new eletronic gear that are being made today are just trying merely to evolve the world to get used to more modern electronic uses. I think that if people become more aware of what the internet can do they could put a stop to many things, such as danger that may come with dealing with bad things on the web.

Essay ideas and process

My idea for essay 3 is to get the readers to feel something they may have not experienced yet, which is true love. I think true love is something everyone should have. The process I am going with is to have my audience believe that out in this world, there is somebody for everyone, and that everyone has a special prince charming or princess. Other ideas that I have for this essay is that it will open people's eyes and bring them out of all their closed shells, and brake down all their brick walls and have brighter and better opinions about finding love. In my research, I found articles that are discussing how important it is to be with that one person that will always make you happy, that one person that will always be there for you. I believe this is true, you will never be whole in your life if you don’t find your soul mate. When writing this essay I have discovered that love is one of the most powerful feelings ever. Love can conquer all and have you feeling like you are on top of the world. What this process has meant to me as a writer, is that it has helped me see how powerful and big the argument of does love exist or not really is. I had never known before that many people have gave up on finding love and all the happiness that comes with it, wit this essay I feel it is my mission to et people to believe in the one thing that can bring us all together, which is love, Falling in love and never getting up from it.